Transforming Moments by Gcina Mhlophe
In Transforming Moments by Gcina Mhlophe we have the theme of insecurity, confidence, isolation, independence, identity, acceptance and change. Narrated in the first person it becomes clear to the reader from the beginning of the story that Mhlophe may be exploring the theme of insecurity and confidence. The narrator is worried about her self-image even going as far as describing her hair as being like ‘dry grass in winter.’ Which is an unflattering way to describe one’s hair. If anything the narrator feels not only insecure about how she looks but also lacks confidence. It may also be important that the narrator compares herself physically to how other girls look as this would again play on the theme of confidence or rather the lack of it. The fact that the other girls in the school tease the narrator about her looks (and boys) may also be significant as she is being isolated by her peers due to how she looks and feels about boys. The other girls don’t seem to be able to accept that the narrator has a right to be disinterested when it comes to boys. She is not following anyone’s lead. Though she is insecure about her looks she appears to have the ability to think for herself. There is also a sense that some of the boys in the narrator’s class dislike her due to her appearance and nothing else. If anything Mhlophe may be highlighting how shallow the male can be.
It may also be a case that Mhlophe is exploring the theme of independence. The narrator is not reliant on the opinions of the boys in her class and she also reads books that are not on her curriculum. This could be important as it suggests that despite the insecurity the narrator may feel due to her physical appearance when it comes to others and her academic endeavours she is quite free spirited. Again it seems to be that the narrator is able to think for herself. To be independent of others. It is also interesting that the narrator cannot understand why the young boy wishes to be her boyfriend. She again considers herself to be ugly and unfashionable yet does demonstrate the ability and confidence to become the boy’s girlfriend. If only to spite the other girls in her class. It is also possible that as the narrator finds it difficult to like herself she also finds it difficult to understand that somebody else might like her for who she is.
The narrator’s encounter with Father Fikeni may also be significant as through her engagement with him Mhlophe appears to be exploring the theme of acceptance. There is a sense that the narrator feels accepted by Father Fikeni. That she can be herself when she is around him and his family. The fact that Father Fikeni also brings the narrator to the village meeting suggests that she is being accepted by Father Fikeni. The praise poet also plays an important role in the story. For the narrator he is the impetus for change in her life. She is so overawed by the praise poet she decides to write her first poem when she returns to school. This may be important as for the first time in the story the narrator is beginning to not only change but have more confidence in herself.
This confidence is more noticeable in the last two paragraphs of the story. No longer is the narrator concerned about how she looks. By running her hands over her face she knows that she is beautiful in her own way. She is also no longer comparing herself to the other girls in her class. The fact that Mhlophe also uses imagery of a birth occurring could also be important because if anything the narrator is being reborn. She is more confident than she has been throughout the story and is no longer concerned about others taunting her over her looks or the fact that she does not play on the sports field. Some critics might also suggest that the hidden independence which the narrator displayed earlier in the story is actually coming to the forefront as the story ends. With the driving factor most likely being the acceptance that the narrator felt not only with Father Fikeni but with those in the village too. For the first time in the story the narrator feels as though she does not have to compete with others, so strong is the confidence she feels within herself. The fact that the narrator wants to read her poem to Father Fikeni may also be of some importance as it suggests that the narrator has something to look forward to. She sees hope for the first time in her life. The cock flapping his wings and crowing at the narrator may also have some symbolic significance. It is possible that Mhlophe is using the cock to symbolise not only excitement (flapping wings) but also the fact that the narrator has found her voice. No longer is she insecure and lacking confidence now that she knows and accepts who she is. Through Father Fikeni’s generosity and the praise poets way with words the narrator has found her voice and is excited about her life.
Please. Can’t you also analyse poems for us? You are very good and your reviews are excellent.. E.g. sonnet 18, spring, to learn how to speak..
I’m not very good at poetry Bono.
Can you explain the last paragraph on transforming moments?
Just so you know praise poetry is usually oral poetry and the poems created are to help young people understand who they are and were they come from. By listening to the praise poet the narrator begins to understand herself and her identity.
The narrator has found a new lease of life. After listening to the praise poet she decides she too can become a praise poet. For the first time in the story the narrator feels free. So excited is the narrator about her future that she intends to tell Father Fikeni.
What is the theme of the short story “transforming moments”?
Thanks for the comment Nokukhany. The primary theme of Transforming Moments is identity. However there would also be some secondary themes which include isolation, independence, acceptance and change.
In the opening paragraph the narrator describes her hair as”dry grass in winter “.Please explain this comparison, and say what it tells us about her self-image.
The narrator is looking upon her self-image in an unfavourable light. Which suggests that the narrator has concerns about how she looks. Though later in the story she is no longer concerned about how she looks and is happier in herself.
Why did the narrator think the good looking boy was crazy?
Thanks for the comment Thabiso. The narrator due to her insecurity couldn’t imagine that a boy, particularly a good-looking boy, would be interested in her.
What is a Resonant?.
At the last sentence the narrator says “Across the fence a big red cock flapped its wings and crowed loudly at me, in agreement too”. What does that mean?
Thanks for the comment Lungisani. Resonant is defined as a sound that is deep, clear, and continuing to sound or ring. It can also be used in a different context that may not be sound based.
The cock crowing in agreement suggests symbolically that the narrator is on the right path.
Thank you very much.
You’re welcome Lungisani.
When does the transforming moment start?
There is a sense of change when the narrator sees the praise poet. From that moment she gains a lot of confidence and sees a direction she can follow in her life.
Where does the problem start?
Thanks for the comment Victor. The problem starts with the fact that the narrator (at seventeen) doesn’t believe in herself.