So Much Water So Close to Home by Raymond Carver

So Much Water So Close To Home - Raymond CarverIn So Much Water So Close to Home by Raymond Carver we have the theme of doubt, disconnection, conflict, identity and isolation. Taken from his What We Talk About When We Talk About Love collection the story is narrated in the first person by a woman called Claire and it begins with Claire sitting at home with her husband Stuart who is eating his dinner. What is interesting about the opening scene is the fact that there is some distance between Claire and Stuart (as if they do not know each other). This is emphasized by the fact that Claire is staring at Stuart. This is important as Claire is in essence re-evaluating not only her marriage to Stuart but Stuart himself (who he is, his identity). There is a sense that Claire either no longer recognises the man she is married to or that she is no longer able to hide from what she already knows about Stuart (the fact he is insensitive and cold). There is a disconnection between the two of them. This is further highlighted when the phone rings. Stuart tells Claire not to answer the phone.

Claire’s re-evaluation of Stuart is triggered by the fact that while he was on a fishing trip with his friends, they came across the dead body of a young girl. Rather than immediately report the girl’s body to the police, Stuart and his friends continued with their fishing trip only reporting the girl’s body after they had finished fishing. There is a sense of disbelief within Claire that Stuart took so long to report the body. Though it is not explicitly said in the opening scene of the story, later the reader realizes that Claire suspects that Stuart and his friends may have possibly killed the young girl. This suspicion is noticeable when Claire and Stuart are sitting on the beach. Claire tells Stuart about the Maddox brothers suggesting to Stuart that ‘they said they were innocent.’ This is important as it suggests to the reader that Claire really doesn’t know who Stuart is anymore (identity). That he may be capable of murder.

The idea of isolation as a theme within the story is explored by way of the lack of communication between Claire and Stuart. While they are driving through town in Stuart’s car, on their way to the beach, neither is speaking to each other. Also after they leave the beach, Claire realizes there is nothing she can say (communicate) to Stuart that won’t get him riled, again there is the idea that Claire is not only alone (or isolated) but she is disconnected from Stuart. The symbolism of Stuart ‘looking into the rear-view mirror’ when they are driving home is also important as it suggests that Stuart longs to return to the way things were between him and Claire. However Claire is starting to question, not only her marriage to Stuart but her own identity.

Water also plays a significant part in the story and can be seen as symbolism for violence. First there is the incident at the sink (near water) when Claire pushes the dishes onto the ground. Also the girl’s body was found in water. Then as Claire and Stuart pull up to the picnic ground the reader becomes aware of the creek running under the bridge. It is at this stage that Claire is thinking about why Stuart and his friends had to travel so far to go fishing, when there was so much water close by (again suspicious of Stuart). Also at the creek, Claire identifies with the dead girl and water plays a significant part again, ‘I look at the creek. I’m right in it, eyes open, face down, staring at the moss on the bottom, dead.’ Another incident involving water is when Claire is driving to the funeral. She pulls over and a man knocks on her window. This is important as Claire fears that she will be raped by the man and at the same time she can hear the river below the trees. Water is also mentioned near the end of the story when Stuart is opening Claire’s blouse. It is obvious that Claire doesn’t want to have sex with Stuart (for the second time) and he is forcing himself on her but Claire ‘can’t hear a thing with so much water going.’

Claire’s decision to attend the young girl’s funeral is also significant because it further suggests that Claire identifies (as she did in the creek) with the young girl. What is also worth noting is that Claire tells Marnie in the hairdressers when discussing going to the funeral that ‘we weren’t all that close. But you know.’ Again this suggests that Claire identifies with the young girl, even though she never knew her. It is also interesting that despite Claire finding out after the funeral that the girl’s killer has been found, she remains unsure, telling the woman outside the church that ‘they have friends, these killers.’ This might be important as it could signify that Claire still has doubts about her relationship with Stuart and remains suspicious of him and his friends. There is also a sense at the end of the story that just as Claire has her doubts about Stuart, likewise she appears to be unsure of who she is.

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McManus, Dermot. "So Much Water So Close to Home by Raymond Carver." The Sitting Bee. The Sitting Bee, 3 Jan. 2014. Web.

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  • I found this review very interesting but I disagree only about the loss of identity by Claire. I think that she wants to keep a distance from her husband because she’s only afraid he could have done something terrible and she doesn’t trust him any more. At the beginning of the story, immediately after breaking the dishes, Claire describes Stuart and his friends as respectable family men. She tries to believe in him but after the creek episode she loses certainty. Stuart and his friends could have been fishing in that place. Why did they go so far? Claire sees herself at the bottom of the creek because she has the possible killer close to her.

    Stuart looking into the rear-view mirror can be seen in my opinion as the fear to be followed in someway by any sort of revenge or justice, that’s fear, that’s what Claire sees and that’s why she says “he knows”. When they return home, she couldn’t sleep and she stayed in the bed distant from Stuart because that previous night has been a sort of revelation about the husband’s nature. I think Claire attended the victim’s funeral in order to gain further detachment from the public opinion of the husband.

    I read the Italian version of the book so maybe I’m wrong but when the assassin has been caught he is described as a “boy”. Carver is a fine psyche expert so maybe he wants to show that suspicion and fear are deep seated in Claire’s mind in such a traumatic way that she keeps linked to this state of mind. As a consequence her mistrust is now focused on (without realizing it) her son. That’s why the first thing she says when she arrived home was about Dean. “Water” as the representation of fear, suspicion, death and loss leaves Claire disoriented and vulnerable.

    • Dermot (Post Author)

      Thanks for the comment Matias, you make some valid points and you may possibly be right. The good thing about Carver is that he is open to interpretation.

    • I agree with your reasoning behind why he kept looking in the rear view mirror. I think it was also supposed to serve as evidence of his slight despondency and detachment from Claire and his immediate surroundings, the way his behavior while eating dinner was. I had not thought of it as symbolism for his desire to go back to earlier, happier times with Claire, but that is a clever idea. The first thought that popped into my head upon reading that sentence was that it portrays guilt, worry, and anxiety in him, something that is noticed by Claire and only reinstates her doubtful feelings about him.

      • Dermot (Post Author)

        There definitely is a sense that Stuart is detached from Claire. I would also agree with you that Claire can sense (or feel) Stuart’s guilt, worry and anxiety. Which, as you suggest, only reinstates any doubts she has about what may have happened on the fishing trip.

      • I think looking in the rearview mirror could also suggest that Stuart is revisiting the discovery of the body or the murder, that he wished he had done things differently. Claire’s presence at the funeral is her way of apologizing for her husband.

        • Dermot (Post Author)

          Thanks for the comment Dave. You make an interesting point. One in which I hadn’t thought of before but it makes perfect sense. Stuart could be looking back hoping that things might have been different and Claire could easily of attended the funeral as an apology for Stuart’s actions (or lack of actions).

          • Sure thing. Thanks for this exchange. I think that one also could reasonably infer from her roadside encounter that she had sex with the man in the truck. A character like that wouldn’t be wasted by Carver. It’s another suggestion that the marriage is strained.

            • Dermot (Post Author)

              I would agree with you that the marriage is strained. Though I’m not as sure that Claire might have had sex with the man by the roadside. Though as you suggest Carver wastes very little so it could have happened.

  • Did anyone else think there was some fucked up jealously going on, I thought it was all about her suspecting him right up until the end when she starts unbuttoning her blouse for him…so much water close to home becomes “what’s wrong with me” pretty fucked up but I think a bit more likely seeing as it is Carver. Jealously completely explains all her other actions.

    • Dermot (Post Author)

      Thanks for the comment John. You could be right. There is so much distance between both characters that it is possible that she may be jealous (or suspicious) of him and any other relationship he may have with another (unnamed) woman.

  • Exceptional analysis Dermot again, thank you for your insight!

    Read the story. Final line was Claire thinking “For God’s sake Stuart, she was a little girl”

    Is that Carver showing us, Stuart was actually guilty?

    • Dermot (Post Author)

      Thanks for the comment George. It’s hard to say if Stuart is guilty or not. Some readers think he might be. While others think the only thing he is guilty of is not reporting the crime when he first came across the girl’s body.

      • Thank you for the reply. Then this line might be Claire (and Carver highlighting she) is jealous, isolated and against Stuart and things will never be the same again between the two (Stuart not reporting girl’s dead body was maybe the fact that triggered it). I remember now Stuart urging her ‘to try and understand him’ while she is pulling herself away from him. Another shocking story, another masterpiece from Carver

        • Dermot (Post Author)

          There definitely is a sense of hostility within the relationship which may have been triggered by Stuart’s actions. Though it’s difficult to say for certain as Carver only provides the reader with a limited back-drop (the girl’s death).

  • I think that the main topic of the story is the sense of identification Claire has with the murdered girl. It is more of a feeling that she has been violated as well and that her own youth was in a way taken from her too. That is why she says at the end of the story: For God sake Stuart, she was just a child! She is referring to herself actually and the loss of her own youth by entering a relationship which ended with the marriage. All of the time she can’t find a sense of endearment or any sort of closeness to her husband. Therefore she feels as being bullied by him.

    • Dermot (Post Author)

      Thanks for the comment Ivan. There is a sense of identification between Claire and the murdered girl. I would also agree with you that Claire may feel bullied by Stuart. Which may be a result of having as you suggest entered a relationship at a young age and committing herself to Stuart.

  • In the copy I get there’s no such line as “For God sake Stuart, she was just a child!” in the end. Instead it is “Before Dean comes. Hurry.”, as Claire finished the buttons herself. This could change the interpretation quite a bit. The story is absolutely about Clarie’s re-identification of her husband Stuart, as you have discussed, and her struggling and painful choice about to what extent she is going to believe in / disbelieve in him in the future. I will read the ending of my copy as her desperate want to escape or pass through this marriage crisis, even if it’s just for a moment. Different from simply “opened her legs” (the first time they had sex in the story), this time she responded with Stuart out of her own will. By having sex and getting intimate again with her husband, she actually wants to make believe, and hopefully, make sure, that this is the man she knows as before and she wants that person back instead of just ditch him. Poor Claire.

    • Dermot (Post Author)

      Thanks for the comment Elaine. I would agree with you the final line ‘For God’s sake Stuart, she was just a child’ can really change a reader’s interpretation of the story. Like yourself the version of the story that I read (Vintage 2009) did not include this line. When Carver’s editor Gordon Lish edited the story he stripped it right back and removed over half of what Carver had written. What had originally been a twenty page story became eight pages. Carver was unhappy with the edit and after he died his wife Tess Gallagher posthumously published the collection Beginners which is described as being Carver’s original manuscript of the collection What We Talk about When We Talk about Love.

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